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  millions of people all over the world are fond of sports and games. sport is very important in our life. there are many proverbs about sports and health. for example: « health is above wealth » and « a healthy mind in a healthy body ». sport is popular with children and grown-ups because it helps us to keep fit, look slim, be cheerful, active and disciplined. it makes our body flexible and increases blood circulation.         there is a great number of sports facilities in moscow ( stadiums, swimming pools, skating rinks, tennis courts). every school has a gym or a sports ground. we play indoor and outdoor games there. pupils often hold competitions and win a victory over another school team. we have excellent basketball and football teams in our school. we also run a race and show excellent results.         as for me, sport is an important part of my life. in summer i enjoy playing badminton, football and volleyball. in winter i like skating and skiing. frankly speaking, i*m not keen on sport struggle. i prefer playing basketball to watching.         my favourite sport is an acrobatic. i do acrobatic for 4 years. this sport is for active people because you must jump various jumps. you must be strong, too because acrobats are usually training in pairs and groups. sometimes i have competitions. these are among the most important days in my life. i train for three or four hours three times a week. when i come to my training, i warm up firstly. if i stretch when my muscules are cold, i might do myself an injury. then i begin working in pair. since i began doing acrobatic i achive my aims. i can do many difficult jumps, different tricks and i became strong. the more i train the better i become. practice makes me perfect.         in a word, sport gives me a lot of joy and pleasure. it makes me more sporty and cheerful.