Alot of people like winter (summer) but i hate it. напишите сочинение.

Ienjoy all the seasons for the different things they bring. it' s hard to say that i hate winter. i prefer summer because i’m a summer person. /// let's face it, in winter it' s getting dark earlier, and i feel sleepy. of course, i hate cold mornings when trying to get dressed. my illness comes back with winter,i become heavier and i turn into a lazy person the sun gives me my daily charge of happiness, so i become so gloomy and negative during winter! i don't like the cold weather. i hate cold fingers, having a runny nose. on top of that, i hate to stand around waiting for a bus in a cold weather, and of course, the buses are late, because of snow that covered icy roads and poor visibility caused by horrible winter conditions and blizzards. those are the worst to stand in minus 15-20 degrees waiting for a bus that feels like it will never show up. in winter basically everyone is in closed areas like restaurants, clubs and pubs. /// i listed why i hate winter but i want to mention that it has good points too. the holidays and the new year arrive, the end of the first half of the school year approaches. it's one of the few times during the year with the exception of weekends that my family is together for an entire day doing something fun together. i like all winter activities. i love the snow falling outside my window and the feeling of sitting with the plaid with a good book. the snow is very beautiful until it starts to melt. the streets become grey , slushy , muddy , and wet. //// for me , winter is amazing for about two weeks, but after that, i'm done with it completely.

По грамматике всё правильно если хочешь, можно там где «i have to clean my bed and room» просто написать «i have to clean my bedroom», так логичнее как то