Небольшое сочинение на тему "куда бы я хотел бы отправиться в путешествие в великобритании.!

i have a dream. i would like to go to london one day. i read a lot of books and watch films about this wonderful place.

london is the capital of great britain and it`s the biggest city, too. the capital has many places of interest. if i visit london i will visit british museum. it is one the most famous museums all over the world. also i want to see the heart of london - trafalgar square. and, of course, i will take a picture near the buckingham palace.

i hope one day my dream will come true.    

1. тhе given explanation was not complete.   - предоставленное объяснение было неполным. - given - причастие второе - определение.

2. the voices coming through the open window were very loud.   - доносящиеся через открытое окно голоса были горомкими - coming - причастие первое - определение

3. when burnt coal produces heat.   - при сжигании угля выделяется тепло - burnt - причастие второе - обстоятельство

4. when writing a telegram we must use as few words as possible. - сочиняя телеграмму, надо использовать минимум слов - writing - причастие первое - обстоятельство