Проверьте эссе! ! что добавить, что изменить? nowadays there are a lot of social proplems and workaholism - is one of them. who are they, workaholics? so many people think about this problem, and all of them have their own opinion. from my point of view, it is much better way to be an workaholic in modern world. of course, there are many positive and negative components, pluses and minuses. on the one hand, some people are interested in their job and on work they become much happier. there are a lot of well-known stories, when hard-working person becomes successful, rich and famous. on the other hand, there are many people who dislike their work, but they become workaholics becouse career forses. they depend on their job and spend every minute of the day working, do not have time for anyone else, for example for relatives and friends. it plays a harmful role for organism too: people become more agressive, pessimistic and stressed, relying on coffee and try to keep awake, not enough sleep, eat a poor diet. the risk of having a heart attack increases significantly, as does a chance to get other health problems such as cancer. finally, i can say that so many people, so many minds, but everithing, particulary workaholism, should be in moderation. people should pay attention not only for work, but on their privat-life too.

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My favourite film – мій улюблений фільм today comfortable and well-equipped cinemas attract a lot of  people  of different ages.·the price of the tickets can't be compared with the pleasure to see your favourite actors starring in films with lots of special effects created with the help of the latest computer technologies.no wonder that going to the cinema has become one of the most popular free-time activities among teenagers.my friends and i are among the cinema-goers, too.to my mind, watching a film in the cinema is more exciting than trying to watch it at home because the pleasure might be interrupted by a sudden phone call, a request of your parents to do something about the house or something else.i'd like to tell you about the film i saw some months ago in the cinema.it was the film «avatar», directed by james cameron.cameron spent 400 million dollars on creating that film and it is made using modern 3d-technologies.so if you wear special glasses you may see a three-dimensional picture.it is reported that cameron has been preparing for this film for 10 years! he thoroughly thought over each of the smallest details of the alien world: from the looks of the characters to the nature and philosophy of the aliens' race.to tell the truth, i haven't seen anything more interesting and exciting in my life.the film describes the events of the year 2154.jake, a paraplegic war veteran, is brought to another planet, pandora, which is inhabited by the navi.the na'vi is a humanoid race with their own language and culture and they live in harmony with nature.when his brother is killed in a robbery, paraplegic marine jake sully decides to take his place in a mission to the distant world of pandora.there he learns of greedy corporate figurehead parker selfridge's intentions of driving off the native humanoids na'vi.the woodland of pandora is rich in some precious material and selfridge wants to mine for it.the head of sec-ops, colonel quaritch promises jake restorative treatment for his paraplegia in exchange for the information that would enable quaritch to force the cooperation of the na'vi.jake starts delivering information to quaritch but he understands that he has made a mistake.jake doesn't want pandora to be destroyed.after an epic battle for the fate of the planet the remaining corporate personnel are sent back to the earth and jake and other scientists are allowed to stay on pandora.jake is happy because he finds his real love here.i do not want to say the story is simple or bad, it advances the ideas of care for living beings and nature as the only way to survive for the whole planet. it shows how cruel and irresponsible  people  may be. so everyone can make parallels to the ecological situation on the earth and the way  people  treat it.but you should judge for yourself.in my opinion, this film is great! some  people  say it's too long and perhaps the plot is too complicated, but i strongly recommend you to watch this film and to gain your own impression.