Проверте наличие ошибок) dear editor, dear i am writing to you about the concert in the theater «cosmos» last wednesday with singer maxim. there was an audience of 300 people. the concert started late, because the main singer maxim was too late. but as soon as she arrived they began to show. maxim is a russian singer and music producer. she does not have its group,
it stands alone. at first it was a simple, quiet singer, but then he became the best soloist of the year. she released the two most popular album "my paradise" and "difficult age". these albums, she sang at a concert. in which the audience wept, rejoiced and sang for joy. i really liked her songs, as well as the entire concert. but i did not like what she was late for his concert.
acoustics of the room was amazing, the heating did not work. in 12 concert is over and we went home. why is heating in the room did not work, i was cold and you need to open a cafe, after the concert i was hungry. yours faithfully,

dear editor,i am writing  to you  about the concert  in the theater "cosmos"  last wednesday  with singer  maxim.  the audience  was  300 people.the concert started  late, because  maxim  was too late.  but as soon as  she arrived, they began  to show.  maxim  russian singer  and music producer.  it  does not have its  group, but  stands alone.at first it  was a simple, quiet  singer, but  later it  became the best  soloist of  the year.she released  the two most popular  album "my paradise" and "difficult age".  these albums, she sang  at a concert.  in which  the audience wept,  rejoiced and  sang  for joy.i really liked  her songs, as well as  the entire concert.  but i  do not like the  fact that she  was late for  his concert.  acoustics of  the room  was surprised, heating  did not work.  the 12  gig  is over and  we went home.why is  heat  in the room  did not work, i  froze.  and you can  open a  cafe,  after theconcert i  was hungry.yours

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