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He said it was nice to see her again. he said she looked great. he asked where she had got such a great tan. he asked if she had gone to the seaside. he asked if she'd gone to the crimea, the red sea or the mediterranean sea. he said that that dark soft tan could only be from the coast of the dead sea. he asked if he had guessed it. he asked if she had gone there that summer. he asked if had gone there with her parents or friends. he asked if the hotel had been expensive. he asked her if she had liked the food and why. she asked if he would ever give her a chance to answer at least one of his questions. she asked if she could at least say “hello! it’s nice to see you again! ”. he said he didn’t care about her good manners. he asked her to tell him about her holidays. he said he was dying of curiosity. she said that curiosity had killed the cat. she said that she was really afraid to disappoint him. she said she hadn’t gone to any of those places. he said she looked so different. he said she’d become taller and she looked so sporty. he asked her where she had been the whole summer. he said she had called her several times but she’d never been in. she said it’d not been easy to catch her at home. she said had left very early. she bets he was sleeping like a log at that time.