Проверьте предложение then people to have a cough,a high temperature or other symptoms of some diseases they need to see doctors. надо ли после слова people писать to

Then people with a cough, high fever or other symptoms of the disease should consult a doctor.так грамотнее что ли.

Нет не надо учить надо

Imet my best friend in the first grade. my first impression was that she was very talkative, funny and cheerful. i like that she can always support and offer a helping hand no matter what happens.we have not much in common. we have the same taste in food, we both love the korean cuisine. but we are different in the choice of the films (чтобы складней я добавила предложение "мы разные при выборе фильмов). i like the horror films, but she loves comedies. i don't know how and why we became a close friends, but i surely know that is the frendship which will last forever. she is like a fairy. because she comes to the rescue in every time i need. i appreciate kindness and honesty in people. she always wears a comfortable clothes (удобную и практичную в слова-синонимы). she can sing well and she dreams become a singer. when we are together, we talk about different things and find some adventures.