Do you agree that the Tower is a must-see in London? Why?​ (английский язык 8 класс)

Playing a music instument is a good thing because it trains our memory. in order to memorise a melody, we should repeat it day by day. as well, playing an instument helps to impove our listening skills. a melody or a song has a  specific tone, rhythm  and tonality. a person, who combines all these three components in his music is very powerful. by the time, the musician can play or repeat a song or a melody he just heard much faster than he could do so before. another, the last reason why playing a music instument is good is that the person who plays any kind of instument will be more knowledgeable because he or she will learn notes as well as the songs from classic musicians. thus, to play a music instument is a good thing because it trains our memory, our listening skills and makes us more knowledgeable.