Найдите, , ошибки в сочинении: mike was working as assistant during summer vacation, and found pretty girl named jennifer at the store. he was shy but he finally asked her out. he was so happy and excited about it. on the dating day, he was kind of late because of the traffic jam. he backed to his home and changed his clothes. when he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he has left his money at home! he backed to his home again, but his parent was out and his house key was in the house! he climbed the tree and got his money and run to the bus station. suddenly police car stopped at him and tried to take him to the police station. he explained that he lived that house again and again. he was so late and jennifer wasn’t there. she was so angry. he called her over and over, and wrote a letter that said “can we begin again? please? ” she wasn’t angry any more. they have dinner together. this book was cute. i like love story! it’s really fun to read.

Может такой ваоиант понравится: mike worked as  (shop? ) assistant during his summer vacation, and he found a pretty girl named jennifer on the store. he was shy at first but he finally asked her out. he was very happy and excited about it. on the day of their date, he was a bit late because of traffic jams. he had come home and changed his clothes. when he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he had left his money at home! he went back home again, but his parents were out and his house key was inside the house! he climbed the tree and got his money and then ran to the bus station. suddenly, a police car stopped near him and the policemen tried to take him to the police station. he explained that he lived in that house again and again. he was very late and jennifer wasn’t there. she was very angry. he phoned her over and over again, and then he wrote a letter that said “can we start anew? please! ” but she wasn’t angry any more. they had dinner together. this book is very cute. i like love stories! they are really fun to read.

Birthday is a very wonderful day. everybody likes to celebrate it. it is a good opportunity to spend time with friends, parents, relatives. i was born on the 10th of january. in the morning on my birthday my parents lay the presents near my bed. so the first thing i see when i open my eyes is my presents. my mom and daddy and my little brother come to my room to congratulate me and to sing "happy birthday". usually we hold my birthday party in the evening. once we went to a cafe to celebrate my birthday, but usually we celebrate it at home. we clean the house the day before birthday. in the morning of birthday party day my father goes shopping and buys everything we need. my mother bakes a cake or pie. by the evening food is cooked, the table is laid. we put on evening suits and dresses and wait for the guests. the flat looks nice and cosy. i am always very glad to meet my guests. i like to get flowers and presents. mom gives me the telegram from my aunt. we have an abundant dinner on this day. mom brings in the birthday cake. i blow the candles out. we dance and sing songs, play games and laugh, joke, tell funny stories. i think that my birthday is one of the best days in a year. перевод: день рождения — замечательный день. всем нравится праздновать его, потому что это замечательная возможность провести время с друзьями, родителями, родственниками. я родилась 10 января. утром в день моего рождения мои родители кладут подарки рядом с моей кроватью. поэтому первое, что я вижу, когда просыпаюсь, — это мои подарки. мои мама, папа и маленький брат приходят в мою комнату, чтобы поздравить меня и спеть мне: "с днем рождения". обычно мы отмечаем мой день рождения вечером. однажды мы ходили в кафе, чтобы отпраздновать его, но обычно мы отмечаем этот праздник дома. за день до моего дня рождения мы убираем квартиру. утром в день проведения вечеринки, посвященной празднованию моего дня рождения, мой папа идет за покупками и покупает все необходимое. моя мама печет торт или пирог. к вечеру еда приготовлена, стол накрыт. мы надеваем вечерние наряды и ждем гостей. квартира выглядит красиво и уютно. я всегда рада встречать моих гостей. мне нравится получать цветы и подарки. мама подает мне телеграмму от моей тети. в этот день у нас обильный обед. мама вносит праздничный торт. я задуваю свечи. мы танцуем, поем песни, играем в игры, смеемся, шутим, рассказываем веселые . я думаю, что мой день рождения — самый лучший день в году.