miratarnovskaya

11.03.2022 16:23

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Проверьте моё короткое сочинение по на ошибки.
according to unofficial statistics, the same number of teenagers and older people live in the world. and in the world, almost half of people cannot work because they are too young or old.
on the one hand, the earlier a teenager begins to work, the faster he will get used to work. an ordinary person has worked for centuries since childhood. in addition, adolescents will have more money, they will not have to ask their parents for money and they will be able to buy things that they would like to buy. poor children will be able to help their family with money.
however, working and combining studies is very difficult. every year, the curriculum becomes more and more difficult, and children spend more and more time doing their homework. also, children have less time for entertainment. they will quickly get tired and will not be able to absorb information at school.
thus, the student simply will not be able to live in such a rhythm. the child should receive a good education, and in his free time to realize himself in creativity or science.