Сродкi мастацкай выразнасцi у гэтым вершы маладыя гады, маладыя жаданні! ні жуды, ні нуды, толькі шчасьце каханьня! помніш толькі красу, мілы тварык дзявочы, залатую касу, сіняватыя вочы! цёмны сад-вінаград, цьвет бяленькі вішнёвы, — і агністы пагляд, і гарачыя словы! будзь жа, век малады, поўны сьветлымі днямі! пралятайце, гады, залатымі агнямі!

Ilike summer holidays very much. it is warm and i have a lot of free time in the open air.  i usually spend june at seaside. we usually go to sochi. my parents and i have been there several times. it's nice town and there are many sights to see there. the weather is fine, it’s hot. i like to swim in the in the black sea and try become sun burnt spend much time on the beach. in july i go to the camp. the camp is situated not far from place. we have got happy time at camp. there is the forest near the camp and we go there to pick up mushrooms. in the morning we swim in the swimming pool, play sports games and for a walk.  in the afternoon we play games, make jokes, watch tv, read english and russian books etc. in the evening we dance, play chess and do a lot of interesting things. august comes and i go to the country to see my grandmother and grandfather. i come to help them in the garden. there is much work to do. i water plants and take care of hens. i have nice time in the country. that’s all.

Ядумаю пречесления можно заменить двумя людьмси а далее написать и другие , слова критиков убрать ,большое количество просты заменить на сложно подчинённые предложения начало творчество и творчество после смерти можно объединить в одно более краткое