Нужно написать письмо другу на как я провёл своё лето, p.s от лица девочки

hey. it's been a long time since i've seen you,so i thought i'd write you a letter. this summer made an impression on me. this summer i visited many cities. but the main purpose of our trip was a trip to the black sea. i visited it for the first time and i am very happy with the memories i have left in my memory. i tasted salt water, and it didn't taste good. i went to the dolphinarium. visited the water park. i liked everything very much. i think that this trip was a success and i do not regret the days spent on the beach. i think i've told you everything. and how did you spend your summer vacation? i look forward to hearing from you.

your girlfriend (name)

i love my city.  he was very nice and clean.very beautiful at night.  journeying by abstract colors.  in the square we have conducted various activities.in the new year if the city turned around! all fireworks allowed..when i go to school i'm looking.  i love my city.  for me, my city is my native homeland or mother!

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