Shall we go to mcdonalds? перевод текста

Думаю это не правильно

Я эту ищело в интернете ищи в интернете эту не писай ладно если это правильная то писай ок?

Объяснение:

It is generally agreed today that all people dream about a lot of cash. However, others are sure that money can spoil people’s mind. From my point of view, human beings have always sought wealth. Firstly, money can be a great tool in achieving goals. For example, in order to pass different exams successfully we have an opportunity to buy extra courses and get much more useful information. Secondly, we can support people who need some help. For instance, we can use our money in for charity and help the orphans or the homeless people. And also there is a huge amount of environmental problems which have to be solved. However, my opponents consider that money can make people depend on them.