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Life in the society today i am going to discuss life in the society.in my opinion the society is the key to success. and without a doubt let's get into discussion.   in my point coming the society was logical evolution of people that lived a long long time ago.let's take a simple example. you are a farmer,and you grow rice. but you want to bake a pie. for it you need a lot of different ingredients. but you don't grow them. what do you do? you go to the nearest farm,on which your neighbor grows wheat,and offer him an exchange: you give him rice,he gives you wheat. this is how society started to form long time ago.  but it is good,when you'r neighbors grow everything what you need. but if the farm,which grows what you need is a long way from you'r own? and if the things what you need,like   seashells are in thousands kilometers from you? that is how malls and shopping centers started to form. i am telling all that,because i want  to prove you that society was a logical evolution,and life in it is good. though you need to offer something yourself,in exchange you can get basically everything. nowadays instead of wheat and rice we use money. you sell rice,get money,and buy a phone for them. isn't that cool? so i proved you,that society is good,but life in it isn't so easy. but people need society,otherwise the world would be dead already.

Однажды я поехала с родителями на море. сначала все было прекрасно я ходила и разглядывала город, но потом мы пошли плавать. я не умела плавать и когда вошла в воду мне стало не по себе в море водились   кораллы которые были колючими! когда я   поплыла то наступила на один из них и сильно порезалась. было больно поэтому я больше не плавала! но мне хотелось поэтому эта поездка была худшей в моей жизни! перевод ниже! one day i went with my parents to the sea. at first everything was fine i went and looked at the city, but then we went to swim. i don't know how to swim and when they went into the water i was not myself at sea corals were found which were very prickly! when i swam then stepped on one of them and badly cut. it hurt so i never swam! but i really wanted so this trip was the worst in my