Ссочинением по , . нужно не менее 180 слов. тема - where is it better to keep photos: in your computer or in your album ?

Ibelieve that photos is something that makes our life memorable. you can  capture the best moments in life with one simple action. so that's why it is very important to keep all photos made by you in an accessible place in order to be able to have a look wherever you want. people prefer to save photos in a different ways. but i should say that today the most convenient way to save  pictures is using your computer. i believe that today all computers can provide you with security (in a way if you need it) and safety. you don't have to worry about  where to store a photo album and in what conditions. everything you need is to swith in your device and move your best moments from your telephone or camera. but on the other side i believe that photo albums help us to  a deeper plunge into the atmosphere of those  moments deeper. i can't explain why but old photo albums always make me feel so good and  cause in me a sense of nostalgia. and the smell of  the smell of old times, which brings back pleasant memories. this is what you just can't find in electronic. to cut a long story short i should say that both ways are good in their own way so it's up to you wich one is better.

Have you lived, i've lived he has lived, went did you wear , insisted, i have cut, have worn wrote has written,has just finished flew, have you seen haven't seen примерно так. если найдутся ошибки в решении, укажите.