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Dear lyubov yakovlevna, how are you feeling?   i want to tell you how was my vacation.vacation is always nice.  over time lessons. vacation time to take a walk with your friends, spend timewith family.  the holidays i spent at home. sometimes went on walks. in the evening sat at the computeror watching tv. monday and wednesday i was visiting. and on friday we went to the theatre. sunday  doing homework.thursday my parents went to the cottage. there's a lot of dirt.  sunday  were at the celebrationwhere they burnt a straw man.at the festival    there was dancing, baked pancakes and sold, was a different game,  everyone had fun.in the park there was a concert and competitions, were clowns. after the concert, all were treated to pancakes  and tea.    later    went to burn an effigy. the clowns sang songs and danced. the fire carnival has turned out great. and again, as always i was sorry fun a painted doll.how did you spend your weekend? where have you been?   whether you are on holiday? sonia.

Найти ошибки  1. french persons usually wear good clothes. - french people usually wear good clothes. (person во множественном числе будетpeople) 2. the furniture in the waiting room was very old – считается, что слово «furniture – мебель» является неисчисляемым существительным. и когда речь идёт о мебели в значении «вся мебель» то это слово становится эквивалентом слова «группа», «стая» и т.д. и к нему применяются правила для единственного числа, т.е. в данном случае будет «is». таким образом, на мой взгляд, в данном предложении ошибки нет. 3. let me give you some advice, my friend  (advice – неисчисляемое существительное, поэтому нельзя использовать неопределённый артикль) 4. all the glasses in the windows was broken.