Подправьте мои ответы на вопросы, если что-то не так. можите еще что-то добавить. 1) if you look better does it make your life easier? why do you think so? 2) is it worth spending time and effort on your appearance? why/ why not 3) what is more important for success in life good looks or a healthy lifestyle& why? 4) wouild you like to change anything in your lifestyle? what is it my life will be easier in the moment when i'll do everything i want. while i strive for their goals, no matter which way i overcome every day. life is a game. if i will overcome all the difficulties of this game, the future of my life will be all right. appearance is also a major part of our lives. we have to love yourself and take care of themselves. if it is not, then what kind of beauty we can talk. but i think the most important thing is health, because if you have bad habits, then you cross out all his life. this dependency affects the health of your future children. and in their way of life, i do not want anything to change, because i'm going on the right path that will lead me to the designated target.

заметно, что гугл-переводчик тут причастен, охохо)

я бы сделала так, но это только моё мнение ; )

старалась особо не переделывать вашу версию.

 

1) if you look better, does it make your life easier? why do you think so? 2) is it worth spending time and effort on your appearance? why/ why not? 3) what is more important for success in life: a good look or a healthy lifestyle? why? 4) would you like to change anything in your lifestyle? what would it be?  

 

      my life will be easier if i do everything i want. while i strive for my goals - no matter how i do it - i overcome every day. life is a game. if i overcome all the difficulties of this game, the future of my life will be great. appearance is also a major part of our lives. we should love ourselves and take care of ourselves. if we don't do it, then what kind of beauty can we talk about? but i think the most important is health, because if you have bad habits, then you cross out all your life. this dependency affects the health of your future children.  and i do not want to change anything in their lives, because i choose the right path that will lead me to the designated goal.

Saturday is a perfect day for me .it starts at 10 o'clock with   big breakfast. later  i  usually  help my parents or watch tv. then we go shopping and   after that  we go for    a visit of  our grandmother. and we have dinner with  her . then we go  home and  we   watch tv. and   we  have   dinner . and then i go to bed.