Исправить предложения неверные предложения : 1.the red ball is at the top of the pole at one o'clock every day,2.there are twelve time zones in the world

the biggest accomplishment that i am proud is being so purposeful. for instance: my goal was to know english very well. i took part in many competitions, olympiads and contests where i took several times the first and second places. every year i get some certifications. it has become my tradition. for example: last year i had “radiance retreat” recognition of leadership and personal development; this year i have “certificate for the successful completion of nine-week summer english literature course”. i like setting goals for myself and trying to achieve them.

another of my accomplishments is to be active and competitive. that is why i would like to participate in many activities as much as i can. i like trying something new for me. it is so exiting to

have new feelings, new emotions and new experiences. as everybody knows that life is short, and there are a lot of wonderful things in the world. i do not want to miss anything of them and have the feeling that i lose something. that is why i am really interested in participating in many activities and organizations. for example, i have sent about four essays on international essay competition which is organized by the company “city & guilds”.