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This is a story about a friendship between two the story happened in a small valley near the highest waterfall in the world. it was a sunny and a warm day. the little monkey on the tree named jack was enjoying the diverse scenery of the intact nature. he  seemed to be very happy and pleased! however, the green crocodile named pet was realyjealous and did not like jack. pet is always treating jack as a rubbish. jakc tried to have a talk with a rude and spoiled crocodile. but unfortunately, jack did not manage to change pet`s attitude. one evening the monkey was very hungry and wanted to it. he noticed the yellow banana at the tree on another side of the river. he was so hungry, that he decided to cross the river in order to get the food. it was such a windy a cloudy weather, that jack fel down into the river, which was full of hunters. "it is the end" -  thought jack. suddenly, he felt something underwater pushing him to the nearest coast. finaly, when jack`s destinaton was reached he turned around and saw the crocodile pet! pet saved him! now, they are bossom friends! they both have many in common, which makes them feel to be the one part of something realy essential)

версия

я живу в квартире. она большая, в ней 3 комнаты. в первой- живу я, там есть окно, стол и кровать. во второй, живёт мама- там есть телевизор, стол, кровать и компьютер. третья комната - это гостинная, там большой телевизор и мы любим смотреть его с мамой и кошкой. я люблю нашу квартиру она большая и красивая, покрашенная в красивые цвета!

 

версия

ich lebe in einer wohnung. es ist groß, es 3 zimmer. in der ersten wahr ich lebe, gibt es ein fenster, einen tisch und ein bett. in der zweiten, lebt mom dort mit einem tv, einem schreibtisch, einem bett und einem computer. der dritte raum - das wohnzimmer, es gibt einen großen tv, und wir wollen es mit meiner mutter und einer katze zu sehen. ich liebe unsere wohnung ist groß und schön, gemalt in schönen farben!  

 

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